Focus Group

This is the picture taken of the focus group. It portrays the type of audience that we want to attract. As i was not here when they looked at the film, this is what my team member, Alanta had to say about the group.

Today we asked for a group of people to watch our rough cut edit for our thriller and they all had very positive comments. They were all generally praising the fact that we used a dog in the film and how this much have created much difficulty to get her to listen to us and work with their short attention span. 

Constructive criticism told us the ending didn't make sense, and the car scene was a little messy, but this short rough cut isn't finished yet and the whole car scene is going to be done again as we rushed it because the camera was about to die.'

 

From this, i know that the idea of the dog impressed people. This is something i am pleased about as it was something we all struggled on deciding.

Improvements that need to be made:

• fix all of the continuity errors
• blurry near death POV shot
• Before and after, over the shoulder shots from alex into car (before and after death)
• New scene of Alex on her phone "It's done"
• No swearing
• Make the ending make more sense, that Alex and Carl are working together